1. I have to have a higher expectation for my writing in the class. I need to add more detail to my writing.
2. My stength is imagery. I have a good sense of how to make my writing come to life.
3.My weakness is starting and concluding an essay. Its like I have tasty penut better and jelly in a moldy bread sandwhich: my intrduction and conclusion are terrible, especially compared to my body paragraphs.
Evaluating Your Writing Process
1. I would use a better structure to my esssay to make it make more sense.
2. The easiest thiong for me to improve is my overuse of some words.
3.I need to stop using so many "to be" verbs.
Evaluating Your Successes
1. I am very successful in having a strong thesis for my essay.
2. I used some parrallel structure oin my definition essay.
3. I found that my audience was very defined after I wrote it ( after reading it, it somehow made the audience to be more for girls... I do not know how it happened, but it did.)
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